ext_63596 ([identity profile] rusty-armour.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jooles34 2010-06-02 03:01 am (UTC)

This is so sweet - in more ways than one! It's also incredibly hot! I love the idea of Lester using Connor as a breakfast table and teasing him by eating various pieces of fruit in an erotic manner. And I think it's great that there were still bits of fruit on Connor's back when he and Lester started having sex. The last three paragraphs finished off the story so nicely:

They collapsed, messy, sweaty and breathless together onto the bed. Connor rolled over and looked at Lester, taking in the mess. A grin spread over his face and a giggle escaped his lips.

“I’m still hungry you know.”

Lester couldn’t help but return the smile.


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