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Title: That Man, That Smile
Pairing: Ianto and Jack
Genre: Gen
Rating: PG
Prompt: A bay @ [ profile] story_lottery
Summary: Jack and Ianto are on their way home
Word Count: 100
Disclaimer: Torchwood owned by the BBC, not me.
A/N: I actually managed a drabble!


His body ached. His heart ached.

He’d watched Him die again.

“Quick trip to the country,” He’d said, “pick up stolen alien tech. Easy” And that smile that would make him do anything. Follow Him anywhere.

Slumped against the car door he studied Him behind the wheel; alive, revived, good as new. While he remained bruised and broken.

He received a concerned look, then that man with that smile pointed out of the window.

“Look Ianto. It’s the Bay. We’re home.”

Home for now maybe, but he’d follow that smile to hell and back as many times as it asked.


Date: 2010-03-04 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
That was very nice!! And he did, didn't he.

Date: 2010-03-04 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Yeah... *sigh* Got a bit sad writing that bit.
Thanks for the comment.

Date: 2010-03-04 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh Ianto! I really like the style that you used for this and how it captured Ianto's biggest struggle in loving Jack.

Date: 2010-03-06 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you so much. It's different from the way I normally write, so thank you.

Date: 2010-03-04 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Aww, that was lovely :)

Date: 2010-03-06 12:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Fanks :o)

Date: 2010-03-04 06:22 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile]
Aww, so bittersweet!!! Really lovely!! Thank you!!!

Date: 2010-03-06 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you so much for your comment :o)

Date: 2010-03-04 06:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Aww that was just lovely. And Ianto really did follow that smile didn't he? Great drabble :)

Date: 2010-03-06 12:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you so much. Still a new style for me, glad you liked it.

Date: 2010-03-04 08:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Ianto certainly did follow Jack's smile-and Jack,until the end. That was very touching and tender. You could tell how much Ianto loved Jack.

Date: 2010-03-06 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you so much for your comment.

Date: 2010-03-04 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Poor Ianto. It's hard loving Jack, but he does it so well.

Date: 2010-03-06 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
*sniff* 'Tis. Thanks for your comment.

Date: 2010-03-04 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
The hardes thing for Ianto is watching Jack die. this was beautifully written showing Iant's raw emotions regarding this.

Date: 2010-03-06 12:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Wow, thank you so much. I find it a really interesting part of their relationship to explore. Thank you for commenting.

Date: 2010-03-05 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Aww he really would follow him anywhere. Sweet, nicely done.

Date: 2010-03-06 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you :o)

Date: 2010-03-05 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Really great; very moving.

Date: 2010-03-06 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you so much :o)

Date: 2010-03-09 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you :o)

Date: 2010-06-21 08:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
sadly, he will indeed, snif


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