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jooles34 ([personal profile] jooles34) wrote2011-03-13 05:47 pm
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Caught Between Spaces

Title: Caught Between Spaces
Fandom: Primeval
Characters: Becker
Words: 100
Rating,Warnings: PG - angsty
Disclaimer: Nope, don't own Primeval.
Spoilers: For end season 3, start season 4
 AN: For [livejournal.com profile] primeval100 prompt 'sleep'.

There is that moment, that one perfect, beautiful moment, when your mind is trapped between sleep and waking. Your body is heavy in slumber, yet light; free from the stresses that tighten the muscles across your shoulders and up your neck.

Your mind floats free, the lingering traces of your last forgotten dream drifting away like the last remnants of fine music through the ether. You are at peace, content, happy.

Then subconscious gives way to consciousness and reality forces its way into your mind, brutalising your thoughts.

And they are still missing. Still dead. And it’s still your fault.

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[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2011-03-13 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, intense, beautiful. Poor Becks.

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2011-03-13 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh blimey, fab change of pace and a real punch at the end!
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[personal profile] fredbassett 2011-03-13 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
That's a last line that really packs a punch!

[identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com 2011-03-13 07:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Great drabble and that last line is a kicker!

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2011-03-13 08:02 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, wow! Fantastic drabble. Poor Becker, going through that every morning.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-03-13 09:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Great drabble, and that last line is eek. Poor Becker.

[identity profile] lucifersphoenix.livejournal.com 2011-03-14 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
poor Becker :( this fic makes me really want to cry and fics that make me want to cry are epic!!!

*Becker manpain fics are awesome, there needs to be a tag for it :)*
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[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2011-03-14 08:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*whimpers*

*huggles Becker tight*

[identity profile] lilblubox.livejournal.com 2011-03-15 08:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, this is really powerful! Poor Becker! *huggles Becker*

Fantastic drabble! :)
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[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2011-03-19 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, meep!

[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com 2011-04-03 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
eep... great drabble
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