Competition

[jooles34]

Title: Competition
Characters: Owen and Jack
Word count: 100
Challenge: tw100 prompt: Heroes Gone Fishing
Rating: PG
Summary: Jack and Owen get competitive.

Owen stared at Jack with an intensity usually reserved for interrogating uncooperative prisoners.

His gaze was met by calm blue eyes, stoically giving nothing away.

They had been at this for what seemed like hours. They had been abandoned by the others long ago, but their combined stubbornness and need to win was driving the pair on.

Owen kept still, watching Jack’s face. Looking for something; a sign, a tell, something that would give him away. He narrowed his eyes.

He glanced again at his hand.

“You do. You must have.”

“I do not have any fours Owen; go fish.”

Comments

[emyrldlady.livejournal.com]

LOL! That's a great twist!

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Yey! Glad you liked the end. I had fun with this. Thanks :o)

[kausingkayn.livejournal.com]

Aha, beautiful. Cause our wonderful duo really don't have anything better to do than play go fish. ^_^
I bet it's strip go fish. Don't ask how, I don't know.

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

With Jack there I am sure they would find a way. Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting.

[valancy-joy.livejournal.com]

I'm glad I swallowed my coffee before that last bit. So funny!

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Sorry, didn't mean to try an choke you!

Thank you, I'm glad you found it funny; it was fun to write. Thanks for commenting.

[juliet316]

*snickers* Nice.

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Te he, thank you. I'm glad you liked.

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

Must have been naked go fish.

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

At Torchwood? Would they do such a thing? nooooo... ;o)

Thanks for commenting.

[jo02]

Absolutely delightful!

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Yey, thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[thrace-adams.livejournal.com]

*giggles* OMG too funny :)

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Yey! So glad you liked it!

Thanks for commenting.

[rustydog.livejournal.com]

Okay, I literally laughed out loud. Love it, great reveal!

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

That's fabulous! Thank you so much; I'm glad it made you laugh. Your comment made my day.

[dremiel.livejournal.com]

nice twist!

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. :o)

[lone-star-woman.livejournal.com]

LOL! And I can picture them staring at each other as if they were in a Spaghetti Western stand-off.

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Lol, yeah, they so would be, that's a great image!

Thanks for commenting.

[czarina-kitty.livejournal.com]

Too cute.

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[topgeargirl2.livejournal.com]

This was very good

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Woo! Thank you very much.

[hab318princess.livejournal.com]

*giggles* incoherent now

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

*claps hands* yey! Glad I could make you laugh. Thank you for commenting.

[megans-writing.livejournal.com]

love how you interpreted this! never would have thought of it!

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Sorry for insane delay in replying, but thank you for your comment! Glad you liked it!