Lost

Aug. 3rd, 2010 11:30 am
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Title: Lost
Challenge
[info]tw100 prompt: Homeless
Rating/Warning: PG
Spoilers: For pretty much everything
Disclaimer: Nope, I don't own Torchwood

They’ve lost everything.

Torchwood, where they worked, where their relationship grew, where they found love, is rubble.

They have been forced out of their home, forced from everything they know.

And it’s just the two of them left now.

He knows he has to be strong for both of them. He’s got to take control, ignore the pain in his heart, ignore everything screaming at him to stop, give up, fly from this place.

No, he needs to do whatever it takes to get them somewhere to hide from the world together.

He tries again.

“I really like that coat.”

 

 

 


Date: 2010-08-03 10:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shamazipan.livejournal.com
Oh love it! You totally misled me with this at the start and I had a huige "OH!" moment at the end. Wonderful.

Date: 2010-08-03 12:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Wheee! thank you love. Was feeling trixy when I wrote this. Glad you liked it.

Date: 2010-08-03 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] takisys.livejournal.com
needed two read it twice to get it. I was afraid this prompt too get too gloomy. I'm happy you didn't get there

Date: 2010-08-03 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you, glad you liked it.

Date: 2010-08-03 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kausingkayn.livejournal.com
0.0
At first I thought this was Gwen and Jack looking at their lives after Ianto died from the 456, but then I figured it out.
The last line is the best.

Date: 2010-08-03 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Yeah... I was being sneaky and misleading...I'd appologise, but it's fun.

So pleased you liked the way it worked out.

Date: 2010-08-04 07:57 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lone-star-woman.livejournal.com
Yay. That last line had me grinning from ear to ear.

Date: 2010-08-04 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Hurrah! Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting.

Date: 2010-08-04 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rustydog.livejournal.com
I'm pretty slow -- it took me four reads and double checking the quote to figure out what was happening here. (I suspected early on, but the quote confused me.)

Very cool!

Date: 2010-08-04 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Well thank you for persevering! Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting.

Date: 2010-08-04 04:40 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bk_forever
Neat twist! Thought it was post-CoE at first, but you were sneaky =)

Date: 2010-08-04 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Yeah...sorry about the sneaky...Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting. Prob said it before, but love the icon.

Date: 2010-08-04 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com
really clever... took me reading it twice (and reading comments) to get it - brilliant drabble

Date: 2010-08-04 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

Date: 2010-08-05 02:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scottishwillow.livejournal.com
Great twist. Great job.

Date: 2010-08-05 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

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