Very random poemy thing

[jooles34]

So…I don’t know where this came from. Haven’t written a poem in, like, forever…seriously, since uni I think. Not even sure if this qualifies, it’s more of a random dribbling of words from my mind. It means something and nothing.

 

 

He asked me to stay

I told him to go

It’s the end of the world

And the music won’t play

The rhythm has gone

But we’re left holding on

Clinging to shoulders

The dancing all done

Drifting slowly apart

Our fingertips linger

A beat in the air

Returns to the start.

 

Comments

[emyrldlady.livejournal.com]

Very nice.

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Thanks hon. Weird how it popped into my head, pretty much all there.

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

That was beautiful (and sad). Thanks for sharing.

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Wow, thank you so much. Wasn't really expecting anyone to read this let alone like it. thank you.