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Title: For Once They Had Time
Fandom
: Primeval
Characters: Stephen/Abby
Words: 592
Rating,Warnings:
18, breathplay
Disclaimer: Nope, don't own Primeval.
Spoilers: None
AN:
I WROTE HET!!! [livejournal.com profile] whuffle is very persuasive. I'm still worried that it has turned my language Mills and Boony, but thanks to [livejournal.com profile] fredbassett for a quick turn around beta and reassurance.


 

For once they had time. Time to lie together, stroking, touching, feeling. This wasn’t a hurried morning shag trying to beat the alarm; no tired fumbling at the end of the day; no frantic fuck in a stolen moment when their lives had once again been challenged.

Hands and mouths explored each other’s bodies. Skin was sweat-slicked, flushed, marked with light scratches and mouth-shaped rosettes of colour. 

Stephen moved inside Abby, her body hot and wet around him. She raised her hips to meet each of his slow, shallow thrusts. Their mouths moved together, their breath mingling, swallowing each other’s gasps and moans. Stephen’s hand cupped the swell of Abby’s breast as his thumb rubbed over a nipple already hardened by teeth and lips.

He lifted his hand from her breast and trailed it up her chest before letting his fingers wrap gently around her neck. He opened his eyes and sought Abby’s gaze. She returned his look and gave a slight nod of tacit permission.  Stephen tightened his grip slightly and Abby gasped into his mouth. He moved his head back and steadied himself on one arm.

Stephen pulled back his hips until his cock was nearly out of her body before driving it slowly back in. As he pushed back into her willing body he tightened his grip on her neck further still. He could feel her pulse strong and steady under his fingers and her eyelids fluttered as her eyes rolled back in her head.

He pulled out again, stroking back in, gentle and deep as he’d done before, tightening his hand again. Abby's body arched up into him and a gasp escaped her lips. Her neck was stretched back, the pale skin exposed to him. He reached his head down and bit into the skin where her shoulder met her neck, just under the heel of his hand.

Abby's hips bucked up to meet him again and he squeezed with his hand, firmer than before. Abby's eyes opened to meet his and he knew it was time.

He kept the pressure on, watching Abby's body respond to the increased lack of air. He drove himself into her body, harder and faster now, going deeper with each stroke.

He angled himself so his pubic bone would hit her clit as he pushed home and he watched her gasp, watched her face change, knowing that her mind would be floating in a haze, the lack of air heightening and intensifying the feelings of his cock pushing into her body. He knew the endorphins would be rushing faster around her body, carrying spikes of pleasure to her fogged brain.

She writhed and trembled under him. Her hips rose to meet his thrusts, her back arched, pushing her breasts invitingly close and then with a gasp she came, eyes wide. As her body bucked, her neck was pushed tight into Stephen’s hand and he felt her pulse hammering, saw the look of ecstasy of her face. With the little breath she had left she gasped his name and that’s all it took.

He rode her orgasm, thrusting hard into her, spilling inside her as she stilled, body lax. He took his hand from her throat as the last vestiges of pleasure trembled through him. Stephen caught Abby’s lips in a sloppy, exhausted kiss, while she gasped, filling her lungs with oxygen.

They breathed together, breath mingling, lips just touching. They basked in the heat, and the feel of skin on skin, and the glow of love realised.

For once they’d had time.


Date: 2011-03-29 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emyrldlady.livejournal.com
Oh my! *fans self*

Date: 2011-03-29 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you love, glad you likie.

And if you want more, if you want more, more, more, jump for my love!

Date: 2011-03-29 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
OMG! *iz breathless* This was amazing het!

Date: 2011-03-29 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you so much.

Date: 2011-03-29 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zetaori.livejournal.com
That was one delicious fic.
I often find het porn cringe-worthy, but this one was really good all the way through.
Wow.

Date: 2011-03-29 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you so much for a lovely comment; it means a lot. I'm glad you could enjoy this.

Date: 2011-03-29 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
You haz committed het!

I don't often read het, or find it hot, but this one was an exception on both fronts! Nice one, m'dear *g*.

Date: 2011-03-29 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Lol. And thank you so much for an amazing comment; really appreciate it.

Date: 2011-03-29 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Hot het porn (you haz committed het!)

Date: 2011-03-29 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
lol, I haz.

Thank you, glad you liked.

Date: 2011-03-29 09:46 pm (UTC)
ext_100364: (Default)
From: [identity profile] whuffle.livejournal.com
Congrats! That was every bit as hot as I expected it to be. Hope that the challenge of writing outside your comfort zone was rewarding. I really really liked what you did with it. Some of the imagery was incredible.

Date: 2011-03-29 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vintagememories.livejournal.com
OH DEAR GOD, that was HOT, I loved every bit of it. :)

Date: 2011-03-30 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] squeezynz.livejournal.com
wow.....just - wow.

nope, no mills & boon discernible....just everything wonderful.

thanks for sharing.....*reads again*

Date: 2011-03-30 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] auntypam.livejournal.com
Incredibly HOT!!!! MY first ship was Stephen/Abby but I never felt I wrote Het well. It's funny how you can have het sex but you can't successfully write it:) But believe me if I wrote it as well as you I'd do it all the time*G*

Date: 2011-03-30 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] x-bellaitalia-x.livejournal.com
Stephen/Abby was my first ship, but I never read anything above a 15 - now I read this and I regret that!

Excellent! And it didn't squick me in the slightest, despite being het! Actually...it was pretty hot *g*

Date: 2011-04-24 12:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com
*gulps* that was hot

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