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Title: An Unusual Kind of Death
Fandom: Primeval
Characters
: Becker, Connor, Lester, Danny, Abby
Words: 100
Challenge
[info]primeval100 prompt "Death by chocolate"
Rating: PG - One naughty word. Title is scarier than the fic.
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Nope, don't own Primeval


“Shit. What the hell is that?” Becker asked, his gun useless, as they stood outside the anomaly.

“Some sort of brown ooze.” Connor mused.

“Thank you Connor, for that most technical of explanations.” Lester chided, starting to inch backwards, watching the mass swell, pulse and grow, getting closer and closer to where they stood.

“Can I suggest we move away before it gets us? Give us a chance to figure out how to beat it?” Danny chimed in, prompting movement from his colleagues.

Abby considered the mass before turning to run herself; “Gives a new meaning to death by chocolate.”




Date: 2010-09-10 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emyrldlady.livejournal.com
Mutant prehistoric cocoa plants!

Date: 2010-09-25 08:17 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-09-10 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com
LOL!

Awesome. xD

Date: 2010-09-25 08:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you, glad yu liked it (sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-10 06:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misura.livejournal.com
The future is made of chocolate and actually, you can have too much of a good thing (such as chocolate)? *g*

Fun!

Date: 2010-09-25 08:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you, glad you liked it (sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-10 06:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com
LOl oh I love Abbys wit!

Date: 2010-09-25 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Yey, glad you liked it, thanks (sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-10 07:05 am (UTC)
ext_27141: (Conclusive Proof)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Hee! Also, ewwwwwwwwww... *g*

Date: 2010-09-25 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Lol, thank you! (sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-10 08:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Heh! If it is choccie, I volunteer to be very brave and go and investigate *g*.

Date: 2010-09-25 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
You are a brave ARC soldier indeed! Thanks for commenting (sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-10 01:13 pm (UTC)
fredbassett: (Default)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
LOL, nice one!

Date: 2010-09-25 08:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you! (sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-10 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
Where is Stephen?! Our tracker boy can taste the stuff... *g*

Date: 2010-09-10 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aylabones.livejournal.com
Stephen had already walked across the anomaly and right now he is waiting to the others, completely covered of melted chocolat... do you know how get him rid of this danger ¿don´t you? mmmm

Date: 2010-09-10 03:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
LOL
Mmmm, I bet a lot of fangirls are willing to lick off all the chocolate.

Date: 2010-09-25 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
*puts up hand* I'll volunteer to help too.

Thanks for commenting. (sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-10 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com
*grins* lovely... wants chocolate nao

Date: 2010-09-25 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thanks *hands you chocolate*
(sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-25 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
*g* thanks!

(sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-10 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
LOL! Or possibly ewwwww! I'm not certain which is more appropriate.

Date: 2010-09-25 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Lol, both work! Thanks

(sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-10 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Nice one, love Abby's comment and Lester's snark.

Date: 2010-09-25 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Yey thanks. Think that is the first line I have ever written for Abby!

(sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-25 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
(don't worry about being a bit late)

Date: 2010-09-11 07:09 am (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (have to write)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Hee! Nicely done :D

Date: 2010-09-25 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you!

(sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-11 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amazonx.livejournal.com
In addition to being an awesome drabble, did you know there's an actual dessert restaurant in Vancouver, Canada, called "Death By Chocolate"? It's FAN-DAMN-TASTIC!

Date: 2010-09-25 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you! and I want to be there nao.

(sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-26 01:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amazonx.livejournal.com
Eh, I still loff you. We talk on Twitter every day, right?

Date: 2010-09-13 10:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Hopes it is chocolate...

Date: 2010-09-25 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
I would volunteer to help combat the threat if it was! Thanks

(sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2010-09-14 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] olivia-j.livejournal.com
Hee! That's very awesome!

Date: 2010-09-25 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

(sorry very late in replying to my comments!)

Date: 2011-02-02 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neferitiel.livejournal.com
Mutant chocolate!!! The prefect death! :D

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